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학생이 쓴 원문
I regret I ashamed my parents run the store for grain.and my house didn’t have a good condition.
So I didn’t invite my friend.
That’s why I wasn’t confiden’t and introvert.
My children might be influenced me.
Talkativty mom can make their children social person.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]ny!
I am sorry that you had these kinds of feelings as a child, According to Psychologists, there are 2 outcomes of our sad past; One is to pass this kind of situation to our children, second is not letting their children experience the sad past so they try to create a good atmosphere in the house.
What do you think?
Aki~
I am ashamed my parents run the store for grain.and my house didn’t have a good condition.
>>> I am ashamed my parents ran a store for grain and my house was not in a good condition.
So I didn’t invite my friend.
>>> CORRECT!
or >> So I didn\'t invite any of my friends.
That’s why I wasn’t confiden’t and introvert.
>>> that’s why I wasn’t confident and am introverted.
My children might be influenced me.
>>> My children might have an influenced by me.
Talkativty mom can make their children social person.
>>> Talkative moms can make their children a social person.
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