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Q: What would happen if people did not invent things?
A: I think humans might be extinct now if they didn\'t invent things.
Because actually for humans, they don\'t have enough strength to survive without tools, and they can\'t survive without fire.
And there are so many dangerous animals in the wild.
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2. Because actually for humans, they don\'t have enough strength to survive without tools, and they can\'t survive without fire.
3. And there are so many dangerous animals in the wild.
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think humans might be extinct now if they didn\'t invent things.
>>I think humans might have been extinct now if they didn\'t invent things.
2. Because actually for humans, they don\'t have enough strength to survive without tools, and they can\'t survive without fire.
>>Sadly, for humans, they don\'t have enough strength to survive without tools and fire.
3. And there are so many dangerous animals in the wild.
>>Also, there are so many dangerous animals in the wild.
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