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학생이 쓴 원문
I think I didn’t spoil my children.
Parents can only support them by their ways.
Children chose what they want.
They don’t have to make excuse.
Most important is how did they accept their environment.
Parents just look at them and feel sorry.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]ny!
Parents have a great role in raising their children, it\'s either we build or we break them. But you know what, regardless on how they were trained, in the future they will still be the ones to choose their path.
Aki~
I think I didn’t spoil my children.
>>> CORRECT!
Parents can only support them by their ways.
>>> Parents can only support them in their own ways.
Children chose what they want.
>>> Children choose what they want.
They don’t have to make excuses.
>>> CORRECT!
Most important is how did they accept their environment.
>>> How they embraced their surroundings is crucial.
Parents just look at them and feel sorry.
>>> CORRECT!
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