homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Compare these views. Politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Scientists make the greatest contribution to the world. Which do you agree with?
A. I agree, scientists make the greatest contribution, because scientists make many things. So we Develop thanks to scientists.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ann! I tried giving a more difficult question. And you tried answering it well! Keep it up!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
A. I agree, scientists make the greatest contribution, because scientists develop many things.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
So we Develop thanks to scientists.
>>> So we are advancing. Thanks to scientists.
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