Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: Are the sun and the moon equally important? Why or why not?
A: I think the sun if more important than the moon.
Because the sun gives the living things energy, and the moon also helps people find the way, but it\'s not very important for living.
But I think the moon is also important.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. Because the sun gives the living things energy, and the moon also helps people find the way, but it\'s not very important for living.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina
Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think the sun if more important than the moon.
>>I think the sun is more important than the moon.
2. Because the sun gives the living things energy, and the moon also helps people find the way, but it\'s not very important for living.
>>The sun gives the living things energy, while the moon helps people find the way. However, the moon\'s work is not that important for living.
3. But I think the moon is also important.
>>Still, I think the moon is also important.
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