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2023-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: What do you think about sign language (use of gestures)? Would you like to learn it? I haven\'t really thought about sign language. Because, I think, learning a new language is one of the difficult things. In addition, the sign language is more difficult because when we doing a sign language we have to use gestures instead speak from mouth. But, these days my mind is changing. It\'s reduce my fear of learning a new language. I\'m trying to easy word and memorize. Include the sigh language. I think I can easily learn daily word.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do you think about sign language (use of gestures)? Would you like to learn it?


I haven\'t really thought about sign language.
>> CORRECT!
Because, I think, learning a new language is one of the difficult things.
>> CORRECT!
In addition, the sign language is more difficult because when we doing a sign language
we have to use gestures instead speak from mouth.
>> In addition, the sign language is more difficult because when we do sign language, we have to use gestures instead of speaking.
But, these days my mind is changing.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> But these days, my thoughts about it have changed.
It\'s reduce my fear of learning a new language.
>> It reduced my fear of learning a new language.
I\'m trying to easy word and memorize.
>> I\'m trying to learn easy words and memorize them.
OR >> I\'m trying to learn and memorize easy words.
Include the sigh language.
I think I can easily learn daily word.
>> I think I can easily learn words daily.
OR >> I think I can easily learn the word of the day.

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