Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: Why are stars important?
A: I think stars are important because the fishermen found the way with the stars.
For now, there are the compasses, so they don\'t need stars, but before they were invented, fishermen found the way with stars.
Also, stars are important because they are bright in night.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. For now, there are the compasses, so they don\'t need stars, but before they were invented, fishermen found the way with stars.
3. Also, stars are important because they are bright in night.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes to remember:
1. I think stars are important because the fishermen found the way with the stars.
>>I think stars are important because some fishermen find the way with the stars.
2. For now, there are the compasses, so they don\'t need stars, but before they were invented, fishermen found the way with stars.
>>For now, there are already compasses so they don\'t need the stars, but before they were invented, fishermen would find the way with the stars.
3. Also, stars are important because they are bright in night.
>>Also, stars are important because they are bright at night.
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