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The advantage of the convenience store near my house is that it has a clean interior, an easy-to-find route, special types of snacks and cup noodles that children look for, and a wide variety of beers. The downside is that it is expensive and not friendly.
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The advantage of the convenience store near my house is that it has a clean interior, an easy-to-find route, special types of snacks and cup noodles that children look for, and a wide variety of beers.
>>> CORRECT!
The downside is that it is expensive and not friendly.
>>> CORRECT!
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