homework
학생이 쓴 원문
People are becoming too dependent on the Internet and phone. Is it a positive or negative development?
I think it\'s negative development, because when we walk a street while looking at smartphone. We can\'t see front. So there are many
accident to watching smartphone.
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I think it\'s negative development, because when we walk a street while looking at smartphone. We can\'t see front.
>>> I think it\'s a negative development because when we walk along the street while looking at our smartphone, we won\'t see what\'s ahead of us.
So there are many
accident to watching smartphone.
accident to watching smartphone.
>>> So there are many accidents regarding the use of smartphone.
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