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2012-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Q: Do you think that dysfunctional family life contributes to worsening relationships in society? A : Of course, yes, I do. I think that it is most important to have a good and close relations with his or her parents, and then there is a good chance that he or she will be a good person and behave porperly. I thint that the children from the dysfunctional family like a domestic viloence, a lack of communication among family members are more likely to become a criminal or a psycho. When my home is happy, all goes well!!!!

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Hello [이름], Thank you for doing your homework right away. I was surprised. See you tomorrow! Teacher Faye Here are your corrections: Q: Do you think that dysfunctional family life contributes to worsening relationships in society?A : Of course, yes, I do. >>Of course, I do. >>Yes, I do.I think that it is most important to have a good and close relations with his or her parents, and then there is a good chance that he or she will be a good person and behave porperly. >>Correct!I thint that the children from the dysfunctional family like a domestic viloence, a lack of communication among family members are more likely to become a criminal or a psycho. >>I think that children from a dysfunctional family who are in situations like domestic violence, lack of communication among family members are more likely become a criminal or a psycho/When my home is happy, all goes well!!!! >>Correct!

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