homework
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Q: Do you think that dysfunctional family life contributes to worsening relationships in society?
A :
Of course, yes, I do.
I think that it is most important to have a good and close relations with his or her parents, and then there is a good chance that he or she will be a good person and behave porperly.
I thint that the children from the dysfunctional family like a domestic viloence, a lack of communication among family members are more likely to become a criminal or a psycho.
When my home is happy, all goes well!!!!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework right away. I was surprised. See you tomorrow!
Teacher Faye
Here are your corrections:
Q: Do you think that dysfunctional family life contributes to worsening relationships in society?A : Of course, yes, I do.
>>Of course, I do.
>>Yes, I do.I think that it is most important to have a good and close relations with his or her parents, and then there is a good chance that he or she will be a good person and behave porperly.
>>Correct!I thint that the children from the dysfunctional family like a domestic viloence, a lack of communication among family members are more likely to become a criminal or a psycho.
>>I think that children from a dysfunctional family who are in situations like domestic violence, lack of communication among family members are more likely become a criminal or a psycho/When my home is happy, all goes well!!!!
>>Correct!
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