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2023-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Nikki

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I think that is important. Because that is important for life. So if I happy I have more want live.

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I think that is important. Because that is important for life.

>> I think staying happy all the time is an important part of our lives.

So if I happy I have more want live.

>> I believe that if we are happy all the time, we would love to live longer in this world.

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