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Korea\'s tourist attraction is Gyeongbokgung Palace. It\'s the most famous palace in Korea and it\'s in Seoul. And it\'s the palace where the king used to live.
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I searched for some pictures of this palace online and I was amazed by what I saw! I\'ll definitely note this down as one of the tourist attractions I want to visit when I travel Korea someday. Thank you for your recommendation, Eric.
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
OR>> One of Korea\'s tourist attractions is Gyeongbokgung Palace.
It\'s the most famous palace in Korea and it\'s in Seoul.
>> It\'s the most famous palace in Korea located in Seoul.
And it\'s the palace where the king used to live.
>> It\'s also the palace where the king used to live.
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