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I want to be one of 10people alive.
It is common people want to live forever.
Especially I want to speak English fluently before dying.
I haven’t finished my goal.
I have a lot of things that I want to do.
Like reading books, dance and traveling.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]ny!
I agree with you, a lot of people want to live longer. That is why, while we are still strong, try doing the things that you really want to do in life.
Have a good morning!
Aki~
I want to be one of 10 people alive.
>>> CORRECT!
It is common people want to live forever.
>>> It is common for people to want to live forever.
Especially I want to speak English fluently before dying.
>>> I especially want to be fluent in English before dying.
I haven’t finished my goal.
>>> I haven’t finished my goal yet.
I have a lot of things that I want to do.
>>> CORRECT!
Like reading books, dance and traveling.
>>> Like reading books, dancing, and traveling.
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