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If I could be invisible for a day, I would like to follow my second daughter\'s school life. Her eldest daughter tends to talk about herself often, but her second daughter tends to not talk about herself, so she is curious.
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Eliana.
I guess you are curious about your second daughter, and if that happens, I hope that you will be satisfied with your discovery :)
Have a good afternoon.
Aki~
If I could be invisible for a day, I would like to follow my second daughter\'s school life.
>>> CORRECT!
Her eldest daughter tends to talk about herself often, but her second daughter tends to not talk about herself, so she is curious.
>>> My eldest daughter tends to talk about herself often, but my second daughter tends not to talk about herself, so I am curious.
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