Homework
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Q: What are some good and bad things of having toys?
A: I think the good thing of having toys is I can have fun with them.
Actually, for now, I don\'t play with toys that much, but before when I was a kid, I played a lot with toys, and that made me happy.
But the bad thing of having toys is it takes a lot of space.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. Actually, for now, I don\'t play with toys that much, but before when I was a kid, I played a lot with toys, and that made me happy.
3. But the bad thing of having toys is it takes a lot of space.
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think the good thing of having toys is I can have fun with them.
>>CORRECT!
2. Actually, for now, I don\'t play with toys that much, but before when I was a kid, I played a lot with toys, and that made me happy.
>>I don\'t play with toys that much now, but when I was a kid, it made me happy when I played with a lot of toys.
3. But the bad thing of having toys is it takes a lot of space.
>>However, the bad thing of having toys is the space that it takes at home.
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