Homework
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I usually go somewhere or hang out with someone to remove stress. So, I used to go out almost weekend. I went to spa with my friends last weekend. I was really funny and relaxing.
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Today, I will also get a full body massage. The spa is a heavenly place for us. We can feel rejuvenated, beautiful, and relaxed. I hope that you can go visit there again soon.
Thank you for this homework answer and see you again on the next homework. Excellent job!
See you in class tomorrow.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
So, I used to go out almost weekend.
>> So, I used to go out almost every weekend.
I went to spa with my friends last weekend.
>> Correct!
I was really funny and relaxing.
>> I really had fun and it was relaxing.
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