Homework
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Q: Why is playing sports necessary for other people?
A: I think playing sports is necessary for other people because they will be healthy.
I think playing sports makes people healthier, and also that makes people stronger and faster.
But I think they don\'t need to play sports very much.
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Hi, [이름]!
I think playing sports makes people healthier, and also that makes people stronger and faster.
But I think they don\'t need to play sports very much.
Thank you for answering your homework!
Here are some things to take note of:
I think playing sports is necessary for other people because they will be healthy.
>>I think playing sports is necessary for other people because it will make them healthy.
I think playing sports makes people healthier, and also that makes people stronger and faster.
>>I think playing sports makes people healthier, stronger and faster.
But I think they don\'t need to play sports very much.
>>However, I think that they don\'t need to play sports that much.
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