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Hi Daniel,
My name is [Name]. This is [Name] friend Jason. He's 12. His sister is nine. His pet is a budgie.Its name is Dickens.Jason and I go to the same school. There are 450 boys and girls in our school.Jason's form teacher is Mrs. [Name]. She has got a pet, too. Her pet is a tortoise. Our form teacher is Mr. [Name]. I like his lessons. He has two dogs.The dogs love to play in his garden. Now I have a question for you. What's your pet? Yours,John
Happy Easter~
When I heard your Eeaster, I envied you and I became curious about your country.
Specially, I wondered the parade.
My country is not Catholic. So we don't have a ceremony for Easter.
Not to go to work is the reason why it's just Sunday.
Of course, we prepared Holy Saturday mass. We also prepare a candle in the mass. That's all. During the mass, I heard the sound of breaking cup candle even 5 times. Our mass was not pious and our priest's sermon was very boring.
I want to stay at the Catholic country next Easter.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], I missed reading your composition, I haven\'t read some of your compositions for 4 days including the weekend, kkkk..^^
By the way, two thumbs up for you my dear for writing a very good composition as always..
ANd if you want to experience Easter in a Catholic country, you can visit our country and I will be your tour guide,kkk.. That would be 100 dollars a day for being a tour guide okay?kkkk... Just kidding!!
I\'ll talk to you agian later Miss. [Name], I already miss you..:)
Teacher Cam^^
Hi Daniel,My name is [Name].
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This is [Name] friend Jason.
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He\'s 12. His sister is nine.
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His pet is a budgie.Its name is Dickens.
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Jason and I go to the same school.
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There are 450 boys and girls in our school.
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Jason\'s form teacher is Mrs. [Name].
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She has got a pet, too.
>>correct
Her pet is a tortoise.
>>correct
Our form teacher is Mr. [Name].
>>correct
I like his lessons. He has two dogs.
>>correct
The dogs love to play in his garden.
>>correct
Now I have a question for you. What\'s your pet?
>>correct
Yours,John>>correctHappy Easter~
>>correct When I heard your Eeaster, I envied you and I became curious about your country.>>correct (Easter)
Specially, I wondered the parade.
>>Specially, I wondered about the procession.
>>Procession is similar with a parade but it\'s more solemn.. :)My country is not Catholic. So we don\'t have a ceremony for Easter.
>>correctNot to go to work is the reason why it\'s just Sunday.
>>Last Sunday was special because we didn\'t go to work.Of course, we prepared Holy Saturday mass.
>>correct
We also prepare a candle in the mass. That\'s all.
>>We also prepared some candles for the mass and that\'s all.
During the mass, I heard the sound of breaking cup candle even 5 times.
>>During the mass, I heard the sound of the broken candle glass for 5 minutes.
Our mass was not pious and our priest\'s sermon was very boring.
>>correctI want to stay at the Catholic country next Easter.
>>I want to experience Easter in a Catholic country next year.
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