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We usually think being lazy is immoral.
But when we are taking a break, we can charge our energy. Our body and mind need energy.
And taking a break give us creativity and refreshment.
I want to take a break with ease. I have to learn to take a break!
강사 첨삭
It would be lovely if you can always find time to take a break, Heather. May you always balance in everything you do. Take care!-Faith-
We usually think being lazy is immoral.>> CORRECT
But when we are taking a break, we can charge our energy.
But when we are taking a break, we can charge our energy.
>> However, when we take a break, we can recharge our energy.
Our body and mind need energy.
>> CORRECT
OR We need physical and mental energy.
And taking a break give us creativity and refreshment.
>> Moreover, taking a break give us creativity and refreshment.
I want to take a break with ease.
I want to take a break with ease.
>> Therefore, I want to take a break with ease.
I have to learn to take a break!
>> CORRECT
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