Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I am closest to my eldersister.
She lives in Kwang Joo where is near my mother’s house.
Kwang joo is so far from here.
So I keep in touch with her by phone.
I am feeling appreciate to her to take care of my mom.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]ny!
Thank you for doing your homework. Just take note, the place in Korea is spelled \'Gwangju\' rather than \'Kwang Joo\' in English. It\'s also nice to know that your sister takes care of your mom, and that you are closest to her.
- T. Caitlyn
I am closest to my elder sister.
>> CORRECT
She lives in Kwang Joo where is near my mother’s house.
She lives in Kwang Joo where is near my mother’s house.
>> She lives in Gwangju, which is near my mother’s house.
Kwang joo is so far from here.
Kwang joo is so far from here.
>> Gwangju is so far from here.
So I keep in touch with her by phone.
So I keep in touch with her by phone.
>> CORRECT
I am feeling appreciate to her to take care of my mom.
I am feeling appreciate to her to take care of my mom.
>> I appreciate her for taking care of my mom.
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