Homework
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Q: What interesting facts do you know about penguins?
A: I know that some penguins live in warm lands too.
Actually, most penguins live in cold regions like the Antarctica, but some penguins live in warm shores or beaches.
I think I don\'t know more because I\'m not very interested in penguins.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. Actually, most penguins live in cold regions like the Antarctica, but some penguins live in warm shores or beaches.
3. I think I don\'t know more because I\'m not very interested in penguins.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections to consider:
1. I know that some penguins live in warm lands too.
>>I know that some penguins live in warm lands, too.
2. Actually, most penguins live in cold regions like the Antarctica, but some penguins live in warm shores or beaches.
>>Actually, most penguins live in cold regions like Antarctica, but there are also some penguins that live in warm shores or beaches.
3. I think I don\'t know more because I\'m not very interested in penguins.
>>I think I don\'t know more about penguins because I\'m not very interested in them.
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