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2023-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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Q: What do you do to help your parents? A: I help my parents by doing the chores. Actually, when I was a kid, I didn\'t know how to do a house hold chores, so I couldn\'t help, but or now, I can. If I get older, I think I can help them more than now.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to consider:

1. I help my parents by doing the chores.
>> I help my parents by doing some of the chores.

2. Actually, when I was a kid, I didn\'t know how to do a house hold chores, so I couldn\'t help, but or now, I can.
>>When I was a kid, I didn\'t know how to do any household chores so I couldn\'t help, but now I can.

3. If I get older, I think I can help them more than now.
>>If I get older, I think I can help them more than what I can do now.

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