Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, T.Donna.
How is it going?
I remember that your Wednesday is always full of English class schedule.
On the contrary, Wednesday is a resting day for me.
I changed the tire of my car to winter tire this morning.
During the work, my friend and I ate a breakfast in a restaurant near the tire shop, where we really were satisfied with the taste of food.
And can you guess what happend?
After the tire change, it was snowy, and it made us so happy.
And then, I exercised with my friend as usual.
Since my friend was supposed to get a liposuction on his chin, he couldn\'t eat lunch to prepare for anesthesia.
Instead of him, I called my wife and we had a lunch outside together after a long time.
I didn\'t practice a guitar harder these days, so I couln\'t move on next song at the class.
Now, I am listening a song which sung by [이름] Beom Su.
Actually, I plan to go to his concert with my brother next month.
I am singing followed by his voice.
This is the most happiest time, I think.
See you.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Dr. [이름]!
I was still busy yesterday as you have stated. It robbed me time to check your composition immediately as I had a bad migraine. Right now, I feel better and focused checking your homework.
It seems that you love your new tires. The snow was a good sign on how these tires ought to be used. The most important thing is to always drive carefully and defensively.
Actually, I thought that the appointment of your friend was a good timing for you and your wife to spend some time together to grab lunch. I suggest you both to be mindful of your food intake to maintain your blood sugar levels especially your wife.
Your guitar skills can be better by watching great guitarists. In time, you can go back when you are ready. For now, you can sing your heart out in your car.
The grammar suggestions I have for you are getting fewer. You can easily memorize patterns and absorb new vocabulary words. Carry on! Your writing maintains clarity and excellent structure. Very good!
See you in class.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
How is it going?
How is it going?
>> Correct!
I remember that your Wednesday is always full of English class schedule.
>> I remember that your Wednesday is always full of English class schedules.
On the contrary, Wednesday is a resting day for me.
>> Correct!
Or: On the contrary, Wednesday is a rest day for me.
I changed the tire of my car to winter tire this morning.
Or: On the contrary, Wednesday is a rest day for me.
I changed the tire of my car to winter tire this morning.
>> Correct!
Or: I changed the tires of my car to winter tires this morning.
During the work, my friend and I ate a breakfast in a restaurant near the tire shop, where we really were satisfied with the taste of food.
>> During the work, my friend and I ate breakfast in a restaurant near the tire shop, where we really were satisfied with the taste of food.
And can you guess what happend?
>> Correct!
Or: happened
Or: happened
After the tire change, it was snowy, and it made us so happy.
>> Correct!
And then, I exercised with my friend as usual.
And then, I exercised with my friend as usual.
>> Correct!
Since my friend was supposed to get a liposuction on his chin, he couldn\'t eat lunch to prepare for anesthesia.
Since my friend was supposed to get a liposuction on his chin, he couldn\'t eat lunch to prepare for anesthesia.
>> Since my friend was supposed to get a liposuction on his chin, he couldn\'t eat lunch to prepare for the anesthesia.
Instead of him, I called my wife and we had a lunch outside together after a long time.
Instead of him, I called my wife and we had a lunch outside together after a long time.
>> Correct!
I didn\'t practice a guitar harder these days, so I couln\'t move on next song at the class.
>> I didn\'t practice playing the guitar harder these days, so I couldn\'t move on to the next song in class.
Now, I am listening a song which sung by [이름] Beom Su.
Now, I am listening a song which sung by [이름] Beom Su.
>> Now, I am listening to a song which sung by [이름] Beom Su.
Actually, I plan to go to his concert with my brother next month.
>> Correct!
I am singing followed by his voice.
>> I am singing following his voice.
Or: I am singing along with his song.
This is the most happiest time, I think.
This is the most happiest time, I think.
>> This the happiest time, I think.
See you
>> Correct!
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