Homework
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Q: What other things can a person do in a garden?
A: A person can make some structures to play or rest.
I think a lot of people has some swings or chairs in their garden, so their kids can actually play in there or they can rest in there.
Also, there are actually a lot more things to do in a garden.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. I think a lot of people has some swings or chairs in their garden, so their kids can actually play in there or they can rest in there.
3. Also, there are actually a lot more things to do in a garden.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. A person can make some structures to play or rest.
>>A person can make some structures where he/she can play or rest.
2. I think a lot of people has some swings or chairs in their garden, so their kids can actually play in there or they can rest in there.
>>I think a lot of people have some swings or chairs in their garden, so their kids can actually play or rest there.
3. Also, there are actually a lot more things to do in a garden.
>>CORRECT!
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