Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: Who is someone you are grateful for in your life?
A: I am grateful for my parents and my friends.
It\'s because my parents made me born in this world, and my friends actually helped me to get here and become a good person.
And I think I should me grateful for all the people who helped me and influenced me.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. It\'s because my parents made me born in this world, and my friends actually helped me to get here and become a good person.
3. And I think I should me grateful for all the people who helped me and influenced me.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. I am grateful for my parents and my friends.
>>CORRECT!
2. It\'s because my parents made me born in this world, and my friends actually helped me to get here and become a good person.
>>It\'s because I was born in this world thanks to my parents, and my friends actually helped me get here and become a good person.
3. And I think I should me grateful for all the people who helped me and influenced me.
>>Also, I think I should be grateful for all the people who helped me and influenced me.
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