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I like traveling with children. When my children were young, when school was on vacation, my husband would go to work and the children and I would take the train and go on a day trip to a nearby place. It is not easy to take care of young children alone, but I think I also enjoyed the hardship.
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Hi Elaina,
Good to hear that you spend time traveling with your children. it builds the foundation of relationships among family members.
see you tomorrow!
Aki~
I like traveling with children.
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When my children were young, when school was on vacation, my husband would go to work and the children and I would take the train and go on a day trip to a nearby place.
>> CORRECT!
It is not easy to take care of young children alone, but I think I also enjoyed the hardship.
>> CORRECT!
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