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Hi there! Thank you for sharing your composition, Ji [이름]! I enjoyed reading it and will definitely visit the place when I go to Australia. Please take time to review the corrections. You did great! :)

^^T.JAMIE

I am interested to find good restaurants.

>> I am interested in finding good restaurants.

when I come in Australia I was so disappoint, because there are no good restaurant.

>> When I came to Australia, I was so disappointed because there were no good restaurants.

But finally I found a must go restaurant 1month ago!

>> But finally, I found a must-go restaurant a month ago!

That is Small\'s deli near by Kingscross station.

>>That is Small\'s Deli near Kings Cross Station.

I have been go there every Sunday.

>> I have been going there every Sunday.

I finished trying all the menus last Sunday.

>> CORRECT

OR >> Last Sunday, I completed trying all the menus.

They make me happy, special and comfortable.

>>CORRECT

OR>> They bring me joy, make me feel special, and provide comfort.

I think they make tasty sandwich and the staffs are so kind, friendly.

>> I think they make tasty sandwiches and the staff are so kind and friendly.

I like there mood that they greet their regular customer and bread in the basket etc…

>> I like the way they greet their regular customers and serve bread in the basket, etc.

I hope you go there Jamie! If you come here.

>> I hope you go there, Jamie! If you come here.

I will attach pictures. Thank you!