Homework

HOMEWORK: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion. It's natural to know about celebrities. But they have privacy and their own lives. They want to have their own time. So we sould not intrude on their private time. Thesedays, celebrities' divorce become a growing issue. I pity them to having to reveal everything. Although we wonder their lives, we save a part of their private life.

Hello, Amy.What a wonderful writing you\'ve got. I really agree to you opinon. The problem in our society is that they love talking about other people\'s lives. To come to think about it, their lives are a mess as well. I think it is better to focus on our own lives rather that other\'s lives.Teacher MichelleHere are some corrections for you:HOMEWORK:>>CorrectDo you agree or disagree with the following statement? >>CorrectTelevision, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. >>CorrectUse specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.>>CorrectIt\'s natural to know about celebrities. >>CorrectBut they have privacy and their own lives. >>CorrectThey want to have their own time. >>CorrectSo we sould not intrude on their private time. >>So we should not intrude on their private time.Thesedays, celebrities\' divorce become a growing issue. >>These days, celebrities\' divorce becomes a growing issue. I pity them to having to reveal everything. >>I pity them having to reveal everything. Although we wonder their lives, we save a part of their private life. >>Although we wonder about their lives, we save a part of their private life.