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I agree with this point because I hear very often about english is not essential, it’s just basic now in Korea. If some one has good english speak, they can employees in good company. Actually, I don’t want get gooood get a job now. I just hope to get different each culture\'s or a wide field of view.
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I agree with this point because I hear very often about english is not essential, it’s just basic now in Korea.
>>> I agree with this point because I often hear that English is not essential, it’s just basic in Korea now.
If some one has good english speak, they can employees in good company.
>>> If someone is good at speaking English, he could be employed in a good company.
Actually, I don’t want get gooood get a job now.
>>> Actually, I don’t want to get a good job now.
I just hope to get different each culture\'s or a wide field of view.
>>> I just hope each culture won\'t be different and to have wider point of view.
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