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If someone mentions identify theft .
I think It related in criminal of trick.
Sometimes I worried about that incident.
Because I use the same password not to forget password.
If I relate the identify theft.
I would out of my mind.
Because such as criminal starts from abroad.
So it couldn’t solve or takes a lot of time
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]ny!
We need to be careful of our personal information. There are wolves ut there waiting for someone to be their victim.
Take care!
Aki~
If someone mentions identify theft .
>>> If someone mentions about identity theft.
I think It related in criminal of trick.
>>> I think it is related to criminal tricks.
Sometimes I worried about that incident.
>>> CORRECT!
Because I use the same password not to forget password.
>>> Because I use the same password for me not to forget it.
If I relate the identify theft.
>>> If I wil have an experience with identity theft.
I would out of my mind.
>>> I would be out of my mind.
Because such as criminal starts from abroad.
>>> Because such criminals are from overseas.
So it couldn’t solve or takes a lot of time
>>> So it couldn\'t be solved easily nd it takes a lot of time.
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