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I think most result things that made from factorys and made by people are harmful to the earth.
Tourism is developing with damage of nature.
They have to reduce the range of development.
Especially accomadation near the tourist spot is the worthest I think.
강사 첨삭
Great day, Ms [이름]ny!
Most human activities damage the environment, and without patronizing them, companies won\'t be building something to satisfy our demands.
Enjoy the day!
Aki~
I think most result things that made from factorys and made by people are harmful to the earth.
>>> I believe most products manufactured by factories and people hurt the environment.
Tourism is developing with damage of nature.
>>> The development of tourism is causing harm to nature.
They have to reduce the range of development.
>>> CORRECT!
Especially accomadation near the tourist spot is the worthest I think.
>>> Especially accommodation near the tourist spot is the worst, I think.
>>> I think accommodation near the tourist spot is the worst.
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