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I think knowing value of my work makes me hard worker.
In my case, My job fits me therefore, I love my work.
so I naturally work hard .
Also taking a rest is important thing to motivate work.
We should always consider of balance to work energetic.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름], happy day to you! I always appreciate and commend your effort in making your composition. You never hesitated to express your ideas openly. I encouraged you to always give your best in everything you do. Continue to strive hard! Always take good care of yourself. I will see you around! ~T. Lyn
I think knowing value of my work makes me hard worker.
>>I think knowing the value of my work makes me a hard worker.
In my case, My job fits me therefore, I love my work.
In my case, My job fits me therefore, I love my work.
>>In my case, I like my job because it suits me well.
so I naturally work hard .
so I naturally work hard .
>>So naturally, I started working hard.
Also taking a rest is important thing to motivate work.
Also taking a rest is important thing to motivate work.
>>Taking breaks is also important to staying motivated tat work.
We should always consider of balance to work energetic.
We should always consider of balance to work energetic.
>>We must always consider balance in order to work energetically.
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