Homework
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Q: Do you want to make art for a living someday? Why or why not?
A: I think for now, it\'s hard to make art for a living.
It\'s because before, there weren\'t any camera, and for now, there cameras everywhere, and that\'s why it\'s hard to make arts for a living.
So, for now, I need to draw surreal paintings.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. It\'s because before, there weren\'t any camera, and for now, there cameras everywhere, and that\'s why it\'s hard to make arts for a living.
3. So, for now, I need to draw surreal paintings.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to consider:
1. I think for now, it\'s hard to make art for a living.
>>CORRECT!
2. It\'s because before, there weren\'t any camera, and for now, there cameras everywhere, and that\'s why it\'s hard to make arts for a living.
>>Compared to before, there are cameras everywhere now, that\'s why it\'s hard to make art for a living.
3. So, for now, I need to draw surreal paintings.
>>CORRECT!
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