Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I don’t recommend riding only motorcycle in anywhere.
Every situation has pros and cons.
automobile’s development gives us a lot of convenience and growth of industry.
People in town want to be developing their place.
In addition I don’t like noise of motorcycle
and also Korean consider riding a motocycle is most dangerous.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]ny!
It\'s really good to know that most people are aware of the pros and cons of riding a motorcycle.
Have a good day! Thank you for doing your homework every day! Appreciated much!
Aki~
I don’t recommend riding only motorcycle in anywhere.
>>> I don’t recommend riding only a motorcycle anywhere.
Every situation has pros and cons.
>>> CORRECT!
Automobile’s development gives us a lot of convenience and growth of industry.
>>> Automobile development gives us a lot of convenience and growth in the industry.
People in town want to be developing their place.
>>> CORRECT!
In addition I don’t like noise of motorcycle
>>> In addition, I don’t like the noise of a motorcycle
and also Korean consider riding a motocycle is most dangerous.
>>> and also Koreans consider riding a motorcycle to be the most dangerous.
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