Homework
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Q: Are you okay with the total removal of homework in your country? Why or why not?
A: I think it\'s not very good to remove all the homework in our country.
It\'s because actually, for some student, if they don\'t do their homework, they might not study very hard.
I think homework is not a very good motivation to students, but it\'s important.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. It\'s because actually, for some student, if they don\'t do their homework, they might not study very hard.
3. I think homework is not a very good motivation to students, but it\'s important.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to consider:
1. I think it\'s not very good to remove all the homework in our country.
>>CORRECT!
2. It\'s because actually, for some student, if they don\'t do their homework, they might not study very hard.
>>It\'s actually because, for some students, if they don\'t do their homework, they might not study very hard.
3. I think homework is not a very good motivation to students, but it\'s important.
>>CORRECT!
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