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My mood that I want to skip the dinner for diet can’t overcome my attitude.
I only can adjust amount of eating.
When I am alone I try to eat every meal.
And I cook them by using simple recipe .
Like baked meat or stired vegetable.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [이름]ny!
Naturally, women crave different foods at times, depending on their moods. It\'s up to them to slip or to indulge. good luck with that! ^^
Have a great day!
Aki~
My mood that I want to skip the dinner for diet can’t overcome my attitude.
>>> My desire to stick to my diet is being overpowered by my craving for dinner.
I only can adjust amount of eating.
>>> I only can adjust the amount of food that I am eating.
When I am alone I try to eat every meal.
>>> CORRECT!
And I cook them by using simple recipes.
>>> CORRECT!
Like baked meat or stirred vegetables.
>>> CORRECT!
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