Homework
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Q: What are some other things that you\'d want to afford in the future?
A: I want to afford a new house n the future.
I want to independent from my parents, and earn money by my own, and afford a larger house than now.
I want them because I want my own quite place.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. I want to independent from my parents, and earn money by my own, and afford a larger house than now.
3. I want them because I want my own quite place.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. I want to afford a new house in the future.
>>CORRECT!
2. I want to independent from my parents, and earn money by my own, and afford a larger house than now.
>>I want to be independent from my parents, earn money on my own, and afford a larger house than now.
3. I want them because I want my own quite place.
>>I want them because I want my own quiet place.
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