Homework
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Q: What acts of kindness can you do inside your home?
A: I can help my parents doing their chores.
There are four people living in our house, and that makes a lot of chores to do, so I should do some of them to make them less tired.
Also, I can buy them some things that they want.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. There are four people living in our house, and that makes a lot of chores to do, so I should do some of them to make them less tired.
3. Also, I can buy them some things that they want.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes to consider:
1. I can help my parents doing their chores.
>>I can help my parents in doing their chores.
2. There are four people living in our house, and that makes a lot of chores to do, so I should do some of them to make them less tired.
>>There are four people living in our house, and that results to having a lot of chores, so I should do some of them to make them less tired.
3. Also, I can buy them some things that they want.
>>CORRECT!
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