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Q: What are some ways to know if someone is already a mature person?
A: I think the best way to know if a person is mature is being with the person for a long time.
I think the maturity is shown by the person\'s acts, but only with a few acts, I can\'t surely know, so I think it takes a long time.
Also, I think I can also know by how he or she talks.
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2. I think the maturity is shown by the person\'s acts, but only with a few acts, I can\'t surely know, so I think it takes a long time.
3. Also, I think I can also know by how he or she talks.
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think the best way to know if a person is mature is being with the person for a long time.
>> CORRECT!
2. I think the maturity is shown by the person\'s acts, but only with a few acts, I can\'t surely know, so I think it takes a long time.
>>I think maturity is shown through the person\'s acts, but it\'s hard to know with only a few actions, so I think it should take a long time.
3. Also, I think I can also know by how he or she talks.
>>Also, I think I would know by the way he or she talks.
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