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Q: How can schools make the first day of school exciting?
A: I think schools can make the first day of school exciting by do exciting activities.
I think the first day of a new semester is not that exciting because it\'s just ordinary and the activities that students do is always obvious.
So I think they can do some brand new activities so it could be exciting.
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2. I think the first day of a new semester is not that exciting because it\'s just ordinary and the activities that students do is always obvious.
3. So I think they can do some brand new activities so it could be exciting.
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think schools can make the first day of school exciting by do exciting activities.
>>I think schools can make the first day of school exciting by doing exciting activities.
2. I think the first day of a new semester is not that exciting because it\'s just ordinary and the activities that students do is always obvious.
>>I think the first day of a new semester is not that exciting because it\'s just ordinary and the activities that students do are always obvious.
3. So I think they can do some brand new activities so it could be exciting.
>>So, I think they can do some brand-new activities to make it exciting.
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