Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I am sorry.
Suddenly, severe stomachache began during the class.
I couldn\'t help but stoping the class.
Maybe, that\'s because I ate too much food last night.
Fortunately, I am alright now.
Meanwhile, there was a call from her who trys to steal our money.
She left the message that she wanted to talk with the related counselling manager.
However, we won\'t do anything for her.
I am sure that she also knows that the scar is not a big deal.
With only a tiny scar, she can\'t sue us, so she is trying to induce any further mistake of ours.
We won\'t react to her.
If she makes more trouble, so it bothers our work more, we will call the police immediately.
Maybe, she is more stressed than us because we don\'t do anything for her purpose.
Thus, I decided to enjoy this situation.
As for my assignment, of course, children\'s character is influenced by their performance like singing, dancing, and playing in the stage.
But, I think that genetic factor is more important to make one\'s charactor.
See you.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Dr. [이름]!
No worries about your stomachache the previous day. Lately, I have been having stomachache too. The food and the weather might be aggravating our stomach status. Anyway, I hope that yours is already doing better.
I guess this lady is a case of bullying because when people repeatedly and intentionally use words or actions against someone or a group of people to cause distress and risk to their wellbeing, it is considered bullying.
Human beings do not like to believe that they are inherently evil in their acts. It makes them feel bad about themselves but still, they are so delusion themselves or lie to themselves. One step to addressing their negativity is to be the person who listens to and understands them. Enabling their behaviors may have the potential to encourage harmful tendencies to you and your staff.
You are right, you would better call the police when necessary.
Be careful with spelling of words all the time. For the other suggestions, you can study them below. You did so well!
See you soon.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Suddenly, severe stomachache began during the class.
>> Correct!
I couldn\'t help but stoping the class.
>> Correct!
Or: stopping
Maybe, that\'s because I ate too much food last night.
>> Correct!
Fortunately, I am alright now.
>> Correct!
Meanwhile, there was a call from her who trys to steal our money.
>> Correct!
Or: tries
She left the message that she wanted to talk with the related counselling manager.
>> Correct!
However, we won\'t do anything for her.
>> Correct!
I am sure that she also knows that the scar is not a big deal.
>> Correct!
With only a tiny scar, she can\'t sue us, so she is trying to induce any further mistake of ours.
>> Correct!
Or: With only a tiny scar, she can\'t sue us, so she is trying to induce any further mistake from us.
We won\'t react to her.
>> Correct!
If she makes more trouble, so it bothers our work more, we will call the police immediately.
>> Correct!
Maybe, she is more stressed than us because we don\'t do anything for her purpose.
>> Correct!
Thus, I decided to enjoy this situation.
>> Correct!
As for my assignment, of course, children\'s character is influenced by their performance like singing, dancing, and playing in the stage.
>> ...on stage
But, I think that genetic factor is more important to make one\'s charactor.
>> Correct!
Or: character
See you
>> Correct!
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