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A lot of small companies in Korea don’t provide the lunch.
I think they shouldn’t provide the meals.
But providing a goodmeal at the company is important to separate the good company or not.
Korean workers are influenced it how much quality of foods are served by their company.
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Good morning, Ms. [이름]ny!
I am a bit confused about what you mentioned in the second part. What do you mean that they shouldn\'t provide meals? As a worker, I hope that the company would provide lunches for us, but you know what, sometimes employers use this strategy to trick their workers, I would still prefer a higher salary than having this kind of perk. Both will be a better option ^^.
Aki~
A lot of small companies in Korea don’t provide the lunch.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> A lot of companies here don\'r provide lunches.
I think they shouldn’t provide the meals.
>>> CORRECT!
But providing a good meal at the company is important to separate the good company or not.
>>> CORRECT!
Korean workers are influenced it how much quality of foods are served by their company.
>>> CORRECT!
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