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It would be nice if the new and the old were fused together, but if I had to choose one, I would choose the new. This is to keep up with the times and develop further.
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Good day, Eliana!
Some people have the habit of keeping old things because of their sentimental value. It\'s really challenging to decide whether to get a new one or let the old remain.
Thank you for this!
Aki~
It would be nice if the new and the old were fused together, but if I had to choose one, I would choose the new.
>>> CORRECT!
This is to keep up with the times and develop further.
>>> CORRECT!
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