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I think dolphins are smart. I saw the video that a dolphin brings a cellphone that someone dropped into the sea! they looked like they know it lost. In addition dolphins can communicate with each other. So I think dolphins are smart some degree.
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Hi So [이름]!
It is indeed a smart creature.
They maybe cute but I have read that they are actually scary.
Andrea
I think dolphins are smart.
>> Correct
I saw the video that a dolphin brings a cellphone that someone dropped into the sea!
>> I saw the video that a dolphin brought back a cellphone that someone dropped into the sea!
they looked like they know it lost.
>> It looks like they knew it was lost.
In addition dolphins can communicate with each other.
>> In addition, dolphins can communicate to each other.
So I think dolphins are smart some degree.
>> So I think dolphins are smart in some degree.
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