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I used to use gesture when I want to explain the size how much big is it. I draw circle by using my hand and arm to explain it. I used this gesture when I was young, because probably I thought I must use this gesture to tell what I think to people.
강사 첨삭
Hello Lina!
Thank you for your effort in writing today\'s composition. I was laughing because we are similar in using gestures to indicate the size of something. Haha. Well, it is really effective don\'t you think? Anyway, the new year is coming. Let\'s welcome it with a bang!
See you next week!
~~Teacher Kate
>>I used to use gestures when I want to explain the size of something.
I draw circle by using my hand and arm to explain it.
>>I draw circles by using my hand and arm to explain it.
I used this gesture when I was young, because probably I thought I must use this gesture to tell what I think to people.
>>CORRECT!
>>I used this gesture when I was young, because I probably thought I must use this to tell people what I think.
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