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2012-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) This is the boy who had an accident. 2) Yesterday I saw a car which was really old. 3) Mandy is the girl who I met on Friday. 4) I haven't seen Frank, whose brother is five, for a long time now. 5) The robber stole the car which the lady parked in front of the supermarket. I went to my hometown last weekend to attend my friend HyeKyung's wedding. All friends gathered there.We went to university together and we have a meeting. We sometimes met but it's been a long time that all of them meet.We live each other far away.We talked on each other's lives without a pause.After lunch, we got out in the wedding hall and went to drink some teas.We continually talked over tea and were full of laughter. After tea, we walked in the park near the tea house.We took a picture together and enjoyed the beautiful scenery.I was really happy to meet them.But I came back home and I went down with the flu.Actually, I have had a cold before the wedding.A miracle happend during I met them.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], it\'s a happy Monday again!! It\'s nice to hear that you had a great time with your friends in your hometown.. I wanna talk about them in our class later Miss. [Name].. Talk to you in class my dear.. :) Teacher Cam^^ 1) This is the boy who had an accident. >>correct2) Yesterday I saw a car which was really old. >>correct3) Mandy is the girl who I met on Friday. >>correct4) I haven\'t seen Frank, whose brother is five, for a long time now. >>correct5) The robber stole the car which the lady parked in front of the supermarket.>>correctI went to my hometown last weekend to attend my friend HyeKyung\'s wedding. >>correctAll friends gathered there. >>correct We went to university together and we have a meeting. >>We went to university together and had smoe meetings.We sometimes met but it\'s been a long time that all of them meet. >>correct We live each other far away. >>We live far from each other. We talked on each other\'s lives without a pause. >>We talked about each other\'s lives without a pause. After lunch, we got out in the wedding hall and went to drink some teas.We continually talked over tea and were full of laughter. >>After lunch, we went out of the wedding hall and wento to drink some teas. We continuesly talked over tea full of laughter. After tea, we walked in the park near the tea house. >>correct We took a picture together and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. >>correct >>We took pictures together and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. I was really happy to meet them. >>correct But I came back home and I went down with the flu. >>correct Actually, I have had a cold before the wedding. >>correct A miracle happend during I met them. >>correct

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