Homework
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There seem to be many places in our country with beautiful natural scenery. The representative place is Jeju Island, and there are many mountains, seas, and rivers, so you can experience it all over the region.
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Thank you ELIANA for this homework,
You managed to describe the beauty of Jeju Island. Have a good day.
Aki~
There seem to be many places in our country with beautiful natural scenery.
>>> CORRECT!
The representative place is Jeju Island, and there are many mountains, seas, and rivers, so you can experience it all over the region.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> One example is Jejus Island where the whole region offers variety of beautiful sceneries.
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