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I have never planed new year resolution so far.
I always have been living by thinking that
I will not regret about my past time.
But when I listen to your thought .
I decided to make a goal detaily.
My goal is memorizing English word 1500 untill march by my Voca English application.
And in fact I already had a goal this year.
I didn’t say it to anyone.
I will go to step 3 at my academy class in march.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [이름]ny for this homework,
It\'s nice to set goals for the New Year, however, it takes discipline to accomplish them. Good luck with your goals and I support you in your English development :) Fighting! and congratulations on your promotion.
Aki~
I have never planed new year resolution so far.
>>> I have never planned a New Year resolution so far.
I always have been living by thinking that
>>> I have always been living by thinking that
I will not regret about my past time.
>>> I will not regret my past time.
But when I listen to your thought .
>>> But when I heard your thoughts.
I decided to make a goal detail.
>>> CORRECT!
My goal is memorizing English word 1500 untill march by my Voca English application.
>>> My goal is to memorize 1500 English words by March with my Voca English application.
And in fact I already had a goal this year.
>>> And I already had a goal this year.
I didn’t say it to anyone.
>>> CORRECT!
or >> I didn\'t tell anyone
I will go to step 3 at my academy class in march.
>>> I will go to step 3 in my academy class in March.
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