Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I need to know why my child is hanging out with.
Friendships among teenagers also affect sociality.
Therfore I need to know who my child is hanging out with and what he or she likes normally.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mia! I like how you answered your homework. It is direct to the point and meaningful. Well done! ^^ I have corrected a few spelling and punctuations.
-Khai
I need to know why my child is hanging out with.>> I need to know who my child is hanging out with.
Friendships among teenagers also affect sociality.>> CORRECT
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>> Friendships among teenagers also affect social skills.
Therfore I need to know who my child is hanging out with and what he or she likes normally.>> Therefore, I need to know who my child is hanging out with and what he or she likes normally.
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