Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree in Sally`s opinion because junk food is bad for student`s health and if the student eat junk food they will want to eat junk food more.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Henry! ^^
I\'m glad you figured it out. ^^ By the way, you have a strong opinion here. You also explained your point, and I think that\'s great. For more practice, try to express your ideas in at least three to five sentences next time. For now, this is great. Please study my correction below. See you again in class!
~ Teacher Maxine
I agree in Sally`s opinion because junk food is bad for student`s health and if the student eat junk food they will want to eat junk food more.
>> I agree with Sally\'s opinion because junk food is bad for students\' health, and if students eat junk food, they will likely develop a craving for more unhealthy food.파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.